New Thoughts on Words

English: Photograph of tomatoes on a vegetable stall at Borough Market in London, UK (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
Aging & Attitude
Laughter fills the early morning air at the Hammock Beach Club in Florida. The sound is cynical, rich with ridicule and doubt. Bubbles St. Clair interrupts her swim to scan the tower balconies and find the source, a man on the fifth floor corner unit, waves. He is a stranger to her and she does not wave back.
The noise increases as people wake and stand on their terrace, sipping coffee, savoring the view from the lollipop yellow colored building. The neon paint is softened by a pale watermelon trim and whip cream clouds drifting across the sky.
As Bubbles does the backstroke the stranger turns to go inside, she gets a glimpse of his Coke 400 t-shirt and pony tail.
By noon Bubbles has showered, dressed, and is roaming Publix’s produce aisle looking for fennel. The constant beep of an automated shopping cart annoys her, and she recognizes the driver by his red Coke t-shirt. Bubbles counts eleven types of tomatoes the man feels traveling in reverse creating a non-stop beep,beep, beeeeeeeeeeeee.
He is scruffy, overweight and has thin hair on top, a ponytail down his back. His three-day-old beard is red but doing the Cha-Cha with a bit of gray. His needy eyes turn and ask Bubbles, “How was your swim?”
His voice stirs feelings long forgotten, and has a texture reminiscent of her past.
He continues, “You know anything about these Romas from Canada?” Bubbles examines the assortment of tomatoes before answering, “No never had them, look delicious though.” She feels sorry for him beeping back and forth, reduced to squeezing tomatoes for pleasure. She smiles and walks away.
In the parking lot Bubbles watches Tomato Man get in his car, coincidentally parked next to hers, from a distance. She slows her pace and avoids his wave goodbye.
Rolling her eyes, she mutters disbelief then arranges packages on the back seat before noticing a beat up wallet on the ground.
Inside there is a photo license of Tomato Man, and she reads the name aloud, Tom Scary.
I knew a Tom Scary in High School, she thinks.
The address reads, Hensonville, New York. I went to High School in Hensonville, she remembers.
Bubbles gets in her car, turns the air conditioning up real high, and questions aloud, “Is he that stranger?”
….just saying
Only you…. you make me smile. Keep on writing – I miss it so…
Date: Fri, 16 Aug 2013 20:51:04 +0000 To: safetysmart71@hotmail.com
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Marsha, So glad you enjoyed the piece. It was fun to write and initiated from an assignment to write about a stranger you encountered. Miss you too, Be Well, Claudia
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Loved this one! Are you by any chance Bubbles St. Clair? I was asked late last night by one of your “old” beaus if you had had a crush on Tom Scary. I said no, I thought it was another Tom who lived on Main St. (Can’t recall his last name.) Hope he’s in better shape than Tomato Man. More fun to remember old crushes as they were, than to imagine them now! (Except, of course Mr. Wonderful. But I suspect he has a “picture in the attic!”)
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Liz, Great to hear from you. Guilty, I had serious crushes on both Tom’s, You are so right better to remember as they were, thank goodness this is fiction.
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Great story…. Can not wait for another post to see what happens. 🙂
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Susan, That’s a thought I could continue the drama, Claudia
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Nicely done, Claudia.
Yes, it’s Kathy. I’m trying to return to blogging. Forgive my absence. Hope you are well.
Hugs from Ecuador,
Kathy
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Good to hear from you, I have missed your posts.and understand how life gets in the way. I had a big brain pause this summer myself…just saying!
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